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A walk in my life translatedPart 1: flashbacks

I. Fly
a dead bird saved me
because a dead bird
can not eat
chocolate
Est-ce que vous le saviez? (Did you know it?)

II. white walls
no shouts no hair pulling
my mother worries
mon frère et moi (my brother and I)
diapers removed
on the walls we draw,
masterpieces deleted.

III. Heat
no
no says the voice
I put my hand nonchalantly
on the plate of the stove
c’est chaud (it’s hot)

IV. Snow
I dance to the sound of snowflakes
they melt under my tongue
as the carpet
under a heated tin
je mets le feu à ce poème (I light this poem to fire)

Part 2: wanderings in my mind

V. The mountain
I really wanted
but I tell you
it slips, it slips, it slips
Il fait si froid (it's so cold)

scalped by an Indian
locked with pigs
kidnapped by an orang-utan
j’aimerais mieux (I would like better )

VI. Jungle
iguanas and bats
have fun
over my head
Bagheera

A walk in my life

Part 1: flashbacks
I. Voler
un oiseau mort m’a sauvée
parce qu’un oiseau mort
ne peut pas manger
de chocolat
Did you know it?
II. Les murs blancs
pas de cris pas de cheveux tirés
ma mère s’inquiète
my brother and I
couches culottes enlevées
sur les murs nous dessinons,
chefs-d’œuvre effacés.

III. La chaleur
non
non dit la voix
je pose ma main
nonchalamment
sur la plaque de la cuisinière
it’s hot

IV. La neige
je danse au son des flocons
ils fondent sous ma langue
comme la moquette
sous une boîte en fer blanc
chauffée
I light this poem on fire

Part 2: wanderings in my mind
V. La montagne
je voulais vraiment
mais je vous le dis
ça glisse, ça glisse, ça glisse
it’s so cold

scalpée par un indien
enfermée avec des cochons
empo

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Women's pieces calendarby `cybergranny

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It's my first calendar

I hope that you'll like it

It's available in DA now, you can look at all the pages here [link]

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!CSnyder Nov 14, 2010

love the simplicity of the cover, the vibrant colors look superb on the black

`cybergranny Nov 14, 2010 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Thanks a lot

Did you look at all the pages in the print?
I'd like to know if the title, medium, year of the artworks would be good, or even if some poems would add smth more? or if it's good so ^^?

Lot of questions hehe

!CSnyder Nov 14, 2010

yesh i did, i love how you went from b+wish to the colorful, title is fine i think, poems might be good, gives them more for the money

`cybergranny Nov 14, 2010 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

I'll think maybe of adding titles, for the poems I don't think that I have enough personal poems that would fit.
I don't know where to find quotes or books that have fallen into public domain.

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