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Critiques
I think it's great DA has implemented critiques - they offer something more than just a comment. Something more serious. I didn't know where to jump into the crits, so I figured this might as well be my first.
For one, I've given you a grading that is, from my grading experience, 'satisfactory' - simply because it's a difficult piece to see in your photos. It also will leave room for the next peices to have improvement (so please don't think I'm being hard on you).
From what I see, it's very ambiguous - I can't tell if it's a figure, a bird, something that represents a feeling, or some kind of religious icon - I'm not sure. But from what I see, and because it's in scraps, it's a study and a process piece where you are learning how to put materials together - to discover different areas of art that you might actually like.
I'd say keep going on things like this - you'll only know better ways to put materials together into sculptures that are meaningful. Think about the way you are photographing your sculptures too - having it sit in a studio setting doesn't do much for the work (just clutters) so think about a plain cloth backdrop like grey or black - it will better represent your work, especially for critiques.
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