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A bird's present

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A bird in the sky
a warm and yellow present
on your head offers
This is my first haiku :w00t:

I had been haunted by haikus :fear:
Haha I was sleeping and suddenly woke up and haikus were haunting me so this is what came in my mind while I was half asleep and woke me up ^^

Any crit is welcome ;)
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Lanny9000990009's avatar
Haiku´s are a mistery to me ... :(

Is it just me or is something worng with the fav button ? I can't see it ... Did it go somewhere else ?